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Monday, 15 September 2014

Cross Country Poem! By Faasua!

This is a 2 lap WINNER!
CROSS COUNTRY!!!!

Red Faces and sweat around my color, It hurt every step I took in between that hour. I ran then walked then started to jog, before I knew it I finished the job. People cheering me on when I started to sprint, My breath smelled yuck when I finished so I took a Mint. I did not win a place but at least I participated, my mum gave me a burger and then I ate it.

1 comment:

  1. Well done but you need to check your spelling. When you write a poem you need to set it out carefully.

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