A Moment In Time! Writing Test Work Model 2014!!!!!!!!

A Moment in Time

Write to describe this moment in time ….

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Start your writing here:

Hearing segals argue as if they were fighting over a meal, letting the fresh wind punching my face! Smelling a delicious barbecue near by wishing that I could join that happy family for a feast. The white puffy clouds floating above my head. The perfect crystal clear sky teaming up with the bright shining sun making my eyes watery. It got me thinking about their reflection in the dark blue sea. Ahhhhhh… it’s a great day for a picnic.

I caught something in the corner of my eyes. It was a graffiti painting word on the shed. I think it’s a warning. It looked as if that the word spelt ‘BEWARE’! I begin to panic so I looked around to see where my friends were.

I was so furious to see that my friends are leaving me out of a plan. What are they doing I wondered. They start to walk towards me counting down from five. All of a sudden six strong hands pushed me off the high wharf! Floating in the midair for a millisecond listening to my humerous friends laughing then plunging down to the still, calm water. It’s not going to be still for long!

I splash into the exploding water surprised that I am not angry at my friends any more.


This is a piece of work I had to do for a writing assessment about what is happening in the current picture we can see. It helps us with our inferring and guess/predictions on a image or thing!