My Descriptive Writing About My Favourite Person!!!!!

Writing Sample Term 2 2014 28 May My Favourite Person. When my dad hugs me his muscles make me warm and secure that is why he is my favourite person!!!! He takes me everywhere I want to go and he will always love me. I love the way he stands up for me when my mum is angry. He’s also proud of being a tongan like me. Me and my dad are like twins because we both like rugby and we both like the same ice cream flavour which is tropical mango. Mmmmm. My dads hair is short and has a little hill in the front of his head. He’s tall, strong and fast, he also wears his work clothes because he works a night shift till 5:00 in the morning and to lazy and tired to change and his eyes are half closed. He’s got brown eyes and has the same nose as me. My dad is a smart, funny, kind, caring, sporty, a fit kind of person and always has a joke ready to crack. When he’s looking after me it’s like world hunger has disappeared because he takes me out to Burger King, KFC and Mcdonald's! (Which is basically the fast food places!) He pushes me up in school work because he wants me to have a good education and have a great job when I grow up. He tell’s my family to read the bible because it’s the word of our heavenly father and it will make our reading better. He’s always looking on the bright side of things and that is why I love him and he’s my favourite person!!!!!! This is my piece of writing I did in a test and it is about my favourite person, which is my dad! I love him and he loves me. I love you dad.