My Descriptive Writing About My Favourite Person!!!!!

Writing Sample Term 2 2014 28 May My Favourite Person. When my dad hugs me his muscles make me warm and secure that is why he is my favourite person!!!! He takes me everywhere I want to go and he will always love me. I love the way he stands up for me when my mum is angry. He’s also proud of being a tongan like me. Me and my dad are like twins because we both like rugby and we both like the same ice cream flavour which is tropical mango. Mmmmm. My dads hair is short and has a little hill in the front of his head. He’s tall, strong and fast, he also wears his work clothes because he works a night shift till 5:00 in the morning and to lazy and tired to change and his eyes are half closed. He’s got brown eyes and has the same nose as me. My dad is a smart, funny, kind, caring, sporty, a fit kind of person and always has a joke ready to crack. When he’s looking after me it’s like world hunger has disappeared because he takes me out to Burger King, KFC and Mcdonald's! (Which is basically the fast food places!) He pushes me up in school work because he wants me to have a good education and have a great job when I grow up. He tell’s my family to read the bible because it’s the word of our heavenly father and it will make our reading better. He’s always looking on the bright side of things and that is why I love him and he’s my favourite person!!!!!! This is my piece of writing I did in a test and it is about my favourite person, which is my dad! I love him and he loves me. I love you dad.

Space

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This is my recording of my space KNOWLEDGE! Hope you enjoy!!!

My recording of my Preknowledge!!!

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This is what I knew before we started talking about our new topic about space! Please listen closely to my word and I really hope you enjoy it!!!

My recording of my Mihi!

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We have been learning how to say facts about our personality about us in Maori!!! Hope you enjoy IT!!!!!

My Groups Moon Presentation!

This term my class has been learning about space and the phases of the moon. I have learned that the moon orbits around us and we orbit around the sun!!! I hope you enjoy this presentation!

What is a BLOG!

BLOGGING!

BLUE HAT    RED HAT   GREEN HAT   YELLOW HAT   BLACK HAT   WHITE HAT

What is a blog? WHITE hat

At May Road School, 2 classes

(Rm 15/Rm 14) have been given the privilege to have chromebooks. When we are on our chromebooks we go on something called blogs. Our blogs are a magical place to be. A blog is a website where you select a piece of work from your drive and download it to your wonderful blog. It’s also a place where your other relatives from a different country can see your awesome work and if you look on your blog page, on the left you will see a world map and on that world map you will see a flag and that means someone is on you blog. You can comment on other peoples blogs, also when you post something bad on your blog you can not delete it but your teacher can!

This is my feelings about our blogs: Red Hat Thinking!

I feel proud about my blog because when I post my work on it, my family and friends go on it and see if I have achieved on my school work!(If I do I get Burger King!) I also feel excited because when someone writes a great comment on my blog and I don’t know it’s like a mystery kind of secret!

Green hat thinking!

I can get new ideas from other peoples blogs and then put the ideas in my own words then post it on my page! I could put pictures on my blog and I also can use my blog as a time capsule! If I was a parent now I can also use my blog to remember what I did in the past!

BLACK HAT THINKING!!!

One rule on blogging is that we can not give away private information about ourselves. Also  people can write bad comments on your blog and you might accidently give away private information.

Yellow hat thinking!!!

The good points about blogging is that you can share your ideas with others and it is a good opportunity to show the world what you can do. Also people can make suggestions to improve your work!!!!  

 

Transferring Text From A Google Doc Onto MY Blog!

Today I am learning to create a post on my blog. This is a test to see how successful I am at transferring information from a Google Doc onto my blog!